scholarly journals PERGESERAN RIMA DALAM PUISI TERJEMAHAN TAUFIQ ISMAIL (Rhyme Shift in Poems Translated by Taufiq Ismail)

Kandai ◽  
2017 ◽  
Vol 13 (1) ◽  
pp. 1
Author(s):  
Retno Hendrastuti
Keyword(s):  
Target Language ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Descriptive Research ◽  
Entire Data ◽  
Poetry Translation ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive ◽  
Full Shift

One of indications of the success in poetry translation is source language (SL) rhyme and meaning can be transferred into target language (TL) simultaneously. However, sometimes rhyme translation shift cannot be avoided to keep the meaning of SL. This is a qualitative descriptive research that aims to explore rhyme shift and its effect toward translation meaning accuracy. The data were SL-TL rhymes pairs found in eight poems translated by Taufiq Ismail. The analysis result showed that there were various rhyme shifts, including fixed rhymes, partial shift rhymes, and full shift rhymes. Accurate rhyme shifts (without any type rhyme shift) happens on more than a half of entire data. The shifts found were not influence the accuracy of poem meaning. Basically, those were developed as an effort to preserve poems message as a part of universal literature piece.

scholarly journals PENGGUNAAN STRATEGI STRUKTURAL DAN SEMANTIK DALAM TERJEMAHAN CERITA RAKYAT JEPANG “DONGURI DAN KUCING HUTAN” KARYA ANTONIUS PUDJO

2017 ◽  
Vol 9 (1) ◽  
pp. 11
Author(s):  
Febi Ariani Saragih
Keyword(s):  
Research Data ◽  
Target Language ◽  
Original Form ◽  
Linguistic Context ◽  
Japanese Children ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Descriptive Research ◽  
The World ◽  
Folk Literature ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive

Febi Ariani SaragihUniversitas [email protected] AbstractIn the world of translation, translators can use a variety of strategies. One is the structural and semantic strategy. This research discusses the method of translation by using the structural and semantic strategy of Japanese folk literature translated by Antonius Pudjo. There are three basic strategies related to structural issues, namely addition, subtraction, and transposition. As for the semantic strategy there are 9 strategies: levy, cultural equivalent, descriptive equivalent and component analysis, synonym, official translation, depreciation and expansion, addition, deletion, and modulation. This research is qualitative descriptive research. Research data is the translation of the story "Donguri and Kucing Hitam" in which using the structural and semantic strategy in the process of translation. Technique of collecting data is using documentation technique of read-record. While the technique of data analysis is done by analyzing one by one each translation from source language, then analyzed whether using structural or semantic strategy, and classified by type. From the 14 sentences taken as data, it is known that on the structural strategy found transposition strategy 6 sentences, semantic strategy found semantic strategy of adding and synonyming each 5 sentences, deletion 4 sentences, modulation 2 sentence, and levy 1 sentences. Of the 7 sentences used as data in uncovering the implicit meaning contained in the folklore, it is known that there is 1 referential meaning, 2 meanings of linguistic context, and 4 situational meanings. Not too much data is obtained, because besides the source language has made the sentences clearly, chances are also the translator wants the reader to enjoy the literary works as the original form. Antonius translation is good and the language is accepted by target language. In terms of grammatical, there are not many changes made by the translator, and can be categorized as loyal to resource language but idiomatic and communicativeKey Words: structural strategies, semantic strategies, translating, Japanese children story 

STRATEGI PENERJEMAHAN PUISI-PUISI CHAIRIL ANWAR OLEH RAFFEL DALAM BUKU THE COMPLETE PROSE AND POETRY OF CHAIRIL ANWAR

2017 ◽  
Vol 4 (2) ◽  
pp. 140
Author(s):  
Raja Rachmawati
Keyword(s):  
Descriptive Analysis ◽  
Target Language ◽  
Translation Theory ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Literal Translation ◽  
Translation Strategy ◽  
Poetry Translation ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive ◽  
General Translation ◽  
Bahasa Indonesia

This article discusses Indonesian—Poetry translation. The purpose of this article is to describe the strategies of translating poetry of Chairil Anwar by Raffel Raffel in “The Complete Prose and Poetry of Chairil Anwar”, a book written and edited by Raffel Raffel. In order to reach the purpose, the poetries of the source language are compared with the poetries of the target language in order to find out the strategy used in the translation. The method applied in this study is a qualitative descriptive analysis of the meaning. The data were analyzed by using some strategies of translation theory in general given by Newmark, Vinay and Dalberhet, Baker, and Hoed and the strategy of translating poetry by Lavefere. The result of the analysis shows that the general translation strategy used in the translation of Chairil Anwar Poetries are modulation translation, calque or literal translation, descriptive equivalence translation, generic words translation, additional translation and interpretation translation. Meanwhile the strategies of translating poetry used by Raffel are metrical translation, rhymed translation, blank verse translation, and interpretation translation.AbstrakPenelitian ini membahas penerjemahan puisi bahasa Indonesia kedalam bahasa Inggris. Tujuannya adalah mendeskripsikan strategi penejemahan puisi-puisi Chairil Anwar oleh Raffel Raffel dalam bukunya yang berjudul The Complete Prose and Poetry of Chairil Anwar. Untuk mencapai tujuan penelitian ini, puisi-puisi Chairil Anwar dalam bahasa Indonesia dibandingkan dengan terjemahannya dalam bahasa Inggris. Metode yang digunakan dalam penelitian ini adalah metode deskriptif kualitatif. Data dianalisis dengan menggunakan strategi penerjemahan secara umum yang dikemukakan oleh Newmark, Vinay dan Dalberhet, Baker, and Hoed dan strategi penerjemahan puisi oleh Andre Lavefere. Hasil analisis menunjukkan bahwa strategi penejemahan umum yang digunakan dalam menerjemahkan puisi Chairil Anwar adalah strategi penerjemahan modulasi, calque atau penerjemahan literal, kesepadanan deskriptif, penerjemahan dengan kata generik atau kata yang lebih umum, penerjemahan dengan tambahan dan penerjemahan dengan pengurangan. Sedangkan strategi penerjemahan puisi yang digunakan oleh Raffel adalah penerjemahan metris, penerjemahan rima atau sajak, penerjemahan bait secara bebas, dan penerjemahan interpretasi.

scholarly journals INDONESIAN TO ENGLISH SINGABLE TRANSLATIONS BY LOCAL AND FOREIGN TRANSLATORS

2020 ◽  
Vol 4 (2) ◽  
pp. 223-234
Author(s):  
Andika Wijaya ◽  
Gloria Christine Setiyowati
Keyword(s):  
Target Language ◽  
Source Text ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive ◽  
Song Lyric ◽  
The Difference ◽  
The One ◽  
Descriptive Method

Song lyric translation is important because in these recent decades people can access songs worldwide. The aim of this research is to gain an understanding of the difference between singable translations made by an Indonesian translator and a foreign translator by investigating what translation procedures and methods occur in two translated songs from Indonesian to English using qualitative descriptive method. The result of this research indicates that the singable translation made by a foreign translator is more identical to the source language (SL) compared to the one made by an Indonesian translator. However, despite the differences, the two translated songs share something in common, for instance the singability and the length of lyrics. Taking the findings into consideration, it could be said that the foreign translator is more faithful to the source text (ST), while the Indonesian translator emphasizes the target language (TL) more.

scholarly journals CATEGORY SHIFTS IN TRANSLATION: A CASE STUDY ON THE TRANSLATION OF ENGLISH COMPLEX NOUN PHRASES INTO INDONESIAN

2017 ◽  
Vol 25 (1) ◽  
pp. 11
Author(s):  
Darso Donatus
Keyword(s):  
Noun Phrases ◽  
Target Language ◽  
Note Taking ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive ◽  
Observation Method ◽  
Different Characteristics ◽  
Descriptive Method

This study aims at identifying the types of category shifts and explaining their occurrence in the translation of complex noun phrases from English into Indonesian in The Valley of Fear Novel. The data were collected using observation method which was supported by implementing note taking technique in order to find out, identify, and classify the data. The data were analyzed by applying the qualitative descriptive method. The theory applied in this study is the theory of translation proposed by Catford (1965) to identify the types of category shifts found and to explain their occurrence. The result shows that all types of category shifts proposed by Catford (1965) such as structure shift, class shift, intra-system shift, and unit shift are found in the translation. Structure shift occurs in the highest frequency of 339 cases or about 66,86% out of total 507 cases, class shift occurs 75 cases or 14,79 % out of total 507 cases, and intra-system shift occurs 48 cases or 9,46 % out of total 507 cases, and unit shift occurs 45 cases or 8,87 % out of total 507 cases. The occurrence of category shift is caused by the different characteristics of source language and target language.

scholarly journals COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS OF TRANSLATION BETWEEN THE SOURCE LANGUAGE (SL) AND THE TARGET LANGUAGE (TL) IN TAGORE’S POETRY: GITANJALI, SONGS OF OFFERINGS

2017 ◽  
Vol 4 (2) ◽  
pp. 22
Author(s):  
I Komang Sumaryana Putra ◽  
Dian Rahmani Putri
Keyword(s):  
Comparative Analysis ◽  
Literary Criticism ◽  
Target Language ◽  
Single Word ◽  
Rabindranath Tagore ◽  
Philosophical Thought ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Poetry Translation

The long lyrical poem entitled Gitanjali, Songs of Offerings written by Rabindranath Tagore (1861 – 1941) is very interesting and has a deep philosophical thought. In this occasion, Part LVII is selected to be analysed. This poetry was translated into Indonesian by Amal Hamzah in 1952, which is used as the target language (TL). The approach us ed is from literary criticism (intrinsic and extrinsic) and from perspective of translation theories. Based on the analysis, obviously, we can see that a single word may have various senses and those are signalled by the context. Especially in poetry, it is enriched by figurative senses. The process of translating poetry absolutely cannot ignore the message of the source language (SL); however, reminding that there is no 100% synonymy between words in every language, the translating process must notice the intrinsic sight of the poem. We cannot judge whether a translation is bad, better or good, especially translation in poetry, particularly the lyrical poem. In this case, some strategies can be conducted such as: translation shifts, lexical translation, idiomatic translation, borrowing, etc., which can be used to naturalize the poetry translation and to achieve the best readability of the TL text.Keywords: Gitanjali, Lyrical Poem, Source Language, Target Language

scholarly journals THE QUALITY TRANSLATION ANALYSIS OF STUDENT QIRĀAH TEXT

2019 ◽  
Vol 4 (1) ◽  
pp. 11
Author(s):  
Anwar Sanusi
Keyword(s):  
Language Education ◽  
Arabic Language ◽  
Target Language ◽  
Comparative Approach ◽  
Education Department ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Average Accuracy ◽  
Natural Choice ◽  
Translation Analysis ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive

The translation results are considered good quality if the translation results can divert messages that are spread from source language into the target language with an accurate, clear, and natural choice of words. The research aimed to identify and determine the level of accuracy of the translation results of the Arabic Language Education Department of Indonesia University of Education. Accuracy can be considered as the suitability or accuracy of the message conveyed between the source language and target language. This research used a qualitative-descriptive-comparative approach with content analysis design. The results of this research indicate that out of the 16 translation data translated, 18 respondents had an average accuracy of each level, consisting of 12.2% highly accurate, 61.1% accurate, 22.2% less accurate, and 4.5% not accurate.

scholarly journals THE IMPORTANCE OF MEANING IN ARABIC TEXTBOOK TRANSLATION

Jurnal CMES ◽  
2021 ◽  
Vol 14 (2) ◽  
pp. 176
Author(s):  
Hanifah Hikmawati
Keyword(s):  
Target Language ◽  
Foreign Languages ◽  
Source Text ◽  
Translation Process ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Printed Books ◽  
Literature Reviews ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive ◽  
Descriptive Method ◽  
Correct Translation

<pre><a name="_Hlk89781071"></a><span class="y2iqfc"><span lang="EN-US">The translation process includes transferring the source language into the target language with the intention of knowing the meaning. When meaning is expressed  to the reader, then all information, insight, and knowledge can also be understood. As in textbooks, knowledge conveyed through texts in it of course have references from foreign languages, including Arabic. Therefore, in this article there are several objectives; (1) becoming one of the references for writers and translators in understanding the importance of the translation process to find out the meaning of writing textbooks, (2) helping students and students learn to understand science through printed books. In particular, the discussion in this article is focused on understanding, strategies and the urgency of meaning in Arabic translation which is applied to writing lesson texts. This article uses a qualitative descriptive method. The data obtained are sourced from observations, findings, and literature reviews from various sources. The results of the analysis of this article are in the form of emphasizing the importance of the translation process as language transfer and messages from the source text which includes the source language into the target text which includes the target language. The translation process must refer to the understanding of both languages, and involve the sensitivity and feelings of the translator. This translation strengthens the position of language and cultural differences that are no longer a barrier in the development of science. Thus, by using a good and correct translation process, the meaning of textbooks can be fully grasped</span></span></pre>

scholarly journals Individual with Visual Impairment and Translation: A Case Study of Visually Impaired Translator in Translating News Text of TVKU

2018 ◽  
Vol 3 (2) ◽  
Author(s):  
Valentina Widya Suryaningtyas ◽  
Setyo Prasiyanto Cahyono
Keyword(s):  
Visual Impairment ◽  
Visually Impaired ◽  
Target Language ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Translation Study ◽  
Translation Techniques ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive ◽  
The Subject ◽  
Descriptive Method

<em>This article is of specialized translation study. It discusses a translation activity conducted by a visually impaired translator. The study focuses on the translation techniques, methods, and ideology which are carried out by the translator. Using qualitative descriptive method, the authors are able to identify that the translator uses five translation techniques. Four (addition, reduction, adaptation, and generalization) are target-language-oriented techniques and one technique is source-language-oriented one (borrowing). In translating TVKU news text, the subject of the study applies four translation steps. To conclude, the translator’s cognitive concept affects his decision to translate the text.</em>

Translation in slang based on the translator of ideology: critical discourse analysis

2019 ◽  
Author(s):  
Mac Groce
Keyword(s):  
Discourse Analysis ◽  
Critical Discourse Analysis ◽  
Collective Identity ◽  
Cultural Context ◽  
Language Translation ◽  
Target Language ◽  
Critical Discourse ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Study Approach ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive

This paper reveals the social and cultural context by using Critical Discourse Analysis on intertextuality relationships in translations that use slang as an equivalent even though the source text, English, is not slang, and analyzes the translation with an interpretive translation approach related to the recontextualization of the present meanings. Due to the use of slang in the target language. This is a qualitative descriptive study with a case study approach. Translation at the level of intertextuality allows the existence of equivalents that reflect the collective identity of certain social groups. This equivalent has the potential to become a new, unusual and different equivalent from the equivalent that has traditionally existed so far, although it still has an element of accuracy that represents the message from the source language. Translating text in terms of intertextuality requires careful interpretation because it refers to the recontextualization of the meaning in the target language which tends to be different from the source language. Translation using slang is a form of recontextualization because it contains elements of the context of different social and cultural realities.

scholarly journals The Acceptability Humor Translation of English to Indonesian in The Movie Penguins of Madagascar: Discover Their Untold Story Thanksgiving

2020 ◽  
Vol 20 (1) ◽  
pp. 99-116
Author(s):  
Dede Zahrotun Nufus
Keyword(s):  
Target Language ◽  
Source Language ◽  
Valid Data ◽  
Qualitative Descriptive ◽  
Descriptive Method ◽  
Bahasa Indonesia ◽  
Research Show

Abtraks Penelitian ini membahas tentang keberterimaan penerjemahan humor. Penelitian ini bertujuan untuk mengidentifikasi jenis penerjemahan humor dan keberterimaan bahasanya. Penelitian ini menggunakan metode deskriptif kualitatif untuk mendapatkan penelitian yang objektif. Adapun instrumen yang digunakan untuk memeroleh data adalah dengan menggunakan intrumen peneliti sendiri sebagai alat pengumpul datanya. Misalnya dengan menonton film yang memiliki subtitle bahasa Inggris dan film yang bersubtitle bahasa Indonesia. Kemudian mengklasifikasi jenis-jenis humor yang sudah ditandai. Selanjutnya peneliti menjelaskannya berdasarkan konsep keberterimaan yang diajukan oleh Nababan, parameter penilaian keberterimaan suatu terjemahan. Temuan dari penelitian ini menunjukkan bahwa ada tiga jenis humor, seperti humor budaya, humor universal, dan humor linguistik. Dari ketiga jenis humor tersebut, jenis humor budaya lebih sering ditemukan atau muncul dalam penerjemahan subtitle film tersebut.---Abstract The research discusses about the acceptability of humor translation. The analysis is aimed to identify the types of humor translation and its acceptability in target language. The researcher uses qualitative descriptive method to  get the  objective of the research. In order to get the valid data the researcher employs herself to collect the data;   by   watching   the   movie   both   in   English   and   Indonesian   version, understanding and marking the humor that appear in the movie, classifying the types of humor and describing the acceptability of humor which is translated from source   language   into    target   language   base   on   Nababan’s   parameter   of acceptability rates assessment theory. Findings of the research show that: first, three types of humor are found in the movie  Penguins of Madagascar linguistic humor, cultural humor, and universal humor; second, the most frequently types found is cultural humor; third, based on the result of translation version is acceptable.

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